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I saw the gold gullies gushing over with the rainbow water I knew so dear.
Now I see,
The oil.
I saw the lush water gush over the bright beaches.
Now I see,
The tar.
I used to be down with the mainstream oil
Now I see,
Corruption.
I thought I would see change,
I see nothing.

Assonance
Enjambment
Consonance

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  1. Ellie SMarch 14, 2018 at 6:46 PM

    I really like your use of enjambment. it really emphasizes words like corruption to really show the negativity!

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  2. Robert X.March 15, 2018 at 9:48 AM

    I'm sure this poem is a reference to something personal that I don't understand, but I love it. The repetition fits the poem very nicely and your imagery and details are outstanding! Great post.

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